Clarity of point of view 4 / 5 marksI like where you were heading, but some more background would helpAppropriate graphics (fashion, characters etc.) 4 / 5 marksSome good choices here.Relevance of text to key points of point of view 3.5 / 5 marksI like the comedy and relevance but some more development necessaryOverall Presentation 4 / 5 marks Well doneTotal: 15.5/20
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Clarity of point of view
4 / 5 marks
I like where you were heading, but some more background would help
Appropriate graphics (fashion, characters etc.)
4 / 5 marks
Some good choices here.
Relevance of text to key points of point of view
3.5 / 5 marks
I like the comedy and relevance but some more development necessary
Overall Presentation
4 / 5 marks
Well done
Total: 15.5/20
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